Narn e-Dant Gondolin

by Elvellon Ringsbane


Chapter IV: The Battle at the North Gate

All was fire and smoke and confusion. His own mind too was consumed with fire, the fire of rage. Dimly Magor was aware of green mantles through the swirling mist, where the House of the Tree laid low the ranks of the enemy with their iron-studded clubs. Smashing his shield into the face of an orc, Magor swung his mace, crushing the skull of another. Amid the lurid glow that bathed all about him, the spears and scimitars of Morgoth’s foul warriors flashed and gleamed – and fell, fell before the wrath of the Eldar. Yet still they came on, three for every one that died. Like a black tide driven upon the shore by winds of flame, they came on. And slowly, inch by inch, the defenders were borne backwards. Magor could see the gapping mouth of the shattered gates before him. He longed to drive through the hosts of Morgoth even to the plain beyond, drive them from the gates, from Gondolin. But stronger still was his sense of duty, and his loyalty to Rog. He could not abandon his brothers; he could not die yet.

An orc faced him, snarling in rage. Magor whipped his mace round, but even as he did so, the creature thrust at him with its broad-bladed spear. The weapon slid beneath his guard and struck him in the left side nigh the waist, where the overlapping leaves of his breastplate ended. The spearhead drove the rings of his hauberk through the leather tunic beneath and into his side, but it could not pierce that iron mail, Elven forged. With a roar, Magor brought down his mace upon the shaft, splintering the wood, and in that same downward stroke clove the head of his assailant.

A sudden breath of foul air shredded the mist about him, and in that moment, Magor saw that he fought but a few feet from Rog. That other, seeing him also, cried aloud for them to stand together. Magor crossed the space between them in one leap, hewing down an orc even as it lifted its sword to strike the Lord of the Hammer of Wrath. Setting his back to his captain’s, Magor placed his shield so that it covered both his own left side and Rog’s right, and raising his mace, turned his blazing eyes on the orcs that now streamed toward them…


Blood sprayed his face as he brought his mace down on yet another orc skull, splitting it to the teeth. He could sense the movements of Rog behind him as the Elf tore into his enemies – enemies that kept reappearing. Magor smote the head off an orc; its body crashed at his feet; he took a step back to avoid it, even as more of the cursed creatures swarmed over the fallen. So it went, step by step, as the Elves were driven slowly, inexorably backward away from the breach, further into the city. Magor clenched his teeth. No! Morgoth must never take Gondolin. “By the Valar, I shall die before I see it,” he vowed silently.

Swept away from Rog by a sudden surge of the enemy, Magor found himself surrounded by a black sea of orcs. There was no need to keep his face to the foe – everywhere he turned there was an orc leering at him, though most only got one look at his blazing eyes before their black souls were dismissed to Mandos. Magor swung his shield, felling an orc with the sheer force of the blow. Another crumpled beneath the weight of his mace. Suddenly he staggered as a white-feathered arrow struck him in the right shoulder and sprang back. For a moment he swayed off balance, helpless to block or deliver a blow. With a cackle of glee, a goblin leaped toward him – and shrieked as a mace descended on its helm with a sickening thud. Hastily regaining his balance, Magor turned to see one of his house fighting at his elbow. Baravagor they called him, and well merited. “Enjoying yourself, Magor?” The smith grinned as he sent an orc flying.

“You seem to be feasting,” Magor replied with an answering grin as he caught a spear on his great shield and brought his mace down with a crunch on the owner. “It’s not bad out here with a fellow at your back. My thanks.” He spoke lightly, but Baravagor could see the deep gratitude in his eyes. The other nodded grimly as he swept another orc out of the way. “Berenothor is dead. Fell defending Rog.” Magor hacked the arm off a goblin and smashed his mace into its chest. Often had he worked side by side with that mighty smith, whose maces could not be equaled, and his grief was great, but he only nodded. Now was not the time to weep.



Swiftly Aearlinn made her way through the streets of Gondolin, and ever the clamor of battle grew behind her. Her heart wept at the sound, for it seemed to her that Magor would surely fall, knowing as she did his eagerness in war, and how he was like to be among the foremost fighters. Yet no tears fell from her sea-green eyes, and her white hands clenched the edges of her mantle as she forced herself to heed what lay ahead rather than what lay behind.

All the white towers of Gondolin were bathed in a lurid crimson glow, and that light grew greater rather than less, but most terrible was it to the North. There was chaos in the streets, and women wept in doubt and dread, clutching at their children. Aearlinn pitied her kin, glad that she had no son or daughter to worry over, or to share in the bitter memories of this night. For the memory of the Eldar is deep and spans many ages, and who could forget the siege of Gondolin?

Passing on through the darkness and confusion, Aearlinn felt suddenly alone. All about her figures moved, shadows hurrying to war or seeking refuge from the terror at their gates. But none could escape the terror in their hearts. They swept by like a mist driven by relentless winds, or dark waves that rose, then fell, dissolving into oblivion.

Coming out suddenly into a small garden in the centre of which played a fountain, Aearlinn stayed her steps and approached the fount. She laid her hands upon the cool marble of the basin and stared into the depths of the water. Her reflection gazed back at her, a pale face and lovely, framed with dark hair, shimmering and changing as the water was broken by the droplets from the fountain. Only her eyes seemed not to change, for they blended seamlessly with the deep water. Dipping her hands into the water, Aearlinn found that the fountain was no longer cool, but warm. Nevertheless she laved her hands in it and washed her face, and she felt refreshed despite the growing heat, and the music of falling water lessened her loneliness. Then she drank a little, and sitting upon the wide stone rim of the basin, looked about her.

Here the harsh crimson glow of Morgoth was less, for a tower stood nigh, blocking the light. The trees in the small square were still hung with lamps like winking stars, and garlands of white flowers lay strewn upon the flagstones. It seemed to Aearlinn that she sat in a memory, for an instant shut off from the terrors that lay without, and she wondered at how swiftly this night of joy had changed to grief. It was only hours ago that the Gondolindrim had gathered in eagerness for the festival, yet it seemed an age and more since she had stood with Magor upon the Eastern Wall, watching for the dawn. What now would Anor rise to shed its light upon?



A sudden hail of arrows from the archers on the battlements left a great swath of dead enemies at his feet, and gave Magor a space for breath. Lifting his helm to wipe away the blood, sweat and dust, he saw that all the ground from where he stood even unto the North Gate was strewn with the bodies of the dead. Orcs innumerable lay there, piled in heaps wherever the defenders had held fast the longest, and Elves, their bodies twisted and trampled, their cloaks of blue, green, purple and scarlet rent and fouled. Magor’s own hands were scraped and bloodied, the overlapping leaves of his breastplate scored with lines and stained with the black blood of orcs. But beneath the filth the red-gold runes that adorned his armour gleamed through like living flame. Beside him, Magor heard the warning voice of Baravagor, “Tangado haid! (Hold your positions!)” Replacing his helm, Magor gripped his mace and raised his massive shield, bracing for the onslaught of the oncoming tide.

With a crash the orcs drove against the ranks of the Hammer of Wrath like a great dark wave upon a cliff of stone. Magor drew back his shield arm slightly, giving beneath the blow to reduce the shock to his arm, at the same time bringing his mace down like a howling storm upon the heads of his enemies. Blood sprayed into the air, and the crunch of bones was audible even amid the clash of weapons and the fierce cries of battle. “Giro nu Rûth vín! (Tremble beneath our wrath!)”

Taking a step backward, Magor felt the yielding body of the dead beneath his feet. He struggled to find a foothold on the bloodied stones, stumbling as his foot caught upon the fallen. The orcs surged toward him, only to be swept aside by the powerful blows of Baravagor. “Spawn of Morgoth!” he roared. “Go back to your holes!” But suddenly his blows faltered, and Magor saw the head of a spear immerge through his right shoulder. With a cry he leapt to his feet, his mace whistling as it sent two of the nearest orcs flying. The others shrieked and gave way, and the Elf turned hastily to Baravagor. The smith had plucked out the spear and tried to stay the flow of blood, but his arm hung useless at his side.

“Go!” Shouted Magor, smashing a goblin aside with a single blow. “Seek a healer!”

“Nay!” Baravagor flung away his shield and gripped his mace with his left hand. “I will not seek succor for a scratch when my brethren are dying and my city is in peril.” Then raising his voice he shouted, “Rog! Rog the Mighty! Tellin in Dring Belegol! (The Hammers of Aulë have come!)” and leapt at the foe. Seven orcs fell to the sweep of his hammer, but one casting from afar let fly a spear at him as he fought, piercing his throat, and he fell. Magor in his rage snatched the spear even from the body of his companion and putting all his strength fueled by hate into the cast, sent it whistling through the bitter air. So great was the force of its flight that the spear, smiting the orc that had struck down Baravagor, passed clean through its chest and pierced the goblin that stood behind, and both crashed together in ruin.

In his grief a blind rage came over Magor and he fought as if possessed. Dimly he was aware of Rog’s voice shouting above the din of battle: “Rally to me!” Carving his way through the ranks of the enemy toward the sound, he came to the place where Rog fought side by side with Dollam. Bracing against the oncoming foe, Magor locked his shield with theirs, adding it to the wall of red-gold and iron that struggled to stem the tide of orcs. But the folk of the Hammer of Wrath, and those of the Tree were pressed ever back from the gates, and without* the walls the enemy spread his forces, encircling Gondolin east and west…


* that is, “outside”